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(Alright guys, let me preface this. This is an example of what your profile should not be. Anyone that wants to comment on which parts make it terrible, go ahead.)



Name: Shourisha, Kiokure

Age: 600

Visual Age: 32

Years in Soul Society: 300

Years Since Banishment: 250

Gender: Male

Former Division: 2nd Division

Former Shinigami Rank: Captain

Rank: High Elite [In terms of Strength Razz]

Appearance: Shourisha is shorter then those who are around his age he is of the age of thirty two and yet he is five foot four in height, thus this makes people believe that he is much younger then how old he actually is. He doesn't weigh a lot either, he weighs 93 lbs. thus most people would be able to lift him up quite easily and things such as that. He is incredibly pale compared to others, practically as white as snow. However the temperature of his body is quite cold thus when you touch him it feels as if he was made out of ice. On the upper left of his torso, there is a type of Tattoo colored a brownish color, this is a Tattoo given to those that were slaves which were forced to do manual labor and other things as well. His skin is really smooth, he doesn't have any freckles but he can be seen with acne here and there on his face which really stands out due to how pale he is.

He usually as is eyes semi closed due to being somewhat tired all the time due to him being a insomniac which means he doesn't sleep. His eyes are a purplish color which they seem to be observing everything around him even behind his back. These eyes they seem to be able to see through everything and understand everything, these eyes of his usually make others nervous as though as if he knew everything about themselves. His hair color is unusual for a Guy since it's color is a pink type of color. His hair is in a spiky style, covering his head with pink. Bangs of the front drop down until it reaches his nose, his hair is semi long due to the fact that he didn't cut it for a while and he likes it as it is right now. The hair hides his ears as it drops down, thus you wouldn't normally see Shourisha's ears unless a gust of wind picked up and made the hair at the side of his head fly in a direction.

On top of the pink, semi-long and spiky hair rests a hat. Shourisha usually has the hat on. The hat is more for a fashion sense and as well it distracts others from the color of his hair. The hat fits perfectly for his head, it's bigger then his head due to his hair it fits pretty nicely. The hat is colored a dark type of color with a white silvery with hints of green and a purplish pink streak going across it. The middle of it there is a green colored circle and by its side it seems to have wings colored a silvery white with hints of pink and green. At the end of his hat there are a few silvery accessories stitched into it, both of them who look like hearts stabbed through with the same metal which resembles a metal pole of some sorts. Around Shourisha's neck lies a type of collar of sorts, it is made out of red colored leather and as silvery circles at equal distance from another going around the collar, this collar actually absorbs his Reaitsu and stores it. Around 80% of his actual strenght is absorbed by his collar which makes it seem as if he was someone without that much spiritual strength and avoided by others who seek decent fights. Shourisha wears a white colored short sleeved shirt. The shirt is small sized and it looks practically perfect for Shourisha. The third or so last button is the only button that is buttoned up, Shourisha usually has his shirt like this so you can see how he is little physically built he is. On both of his hands are black colored fingerless gloves.

As for the subject of pants, like most people Shourisha has them as well. He has a pair of jeans that are colored a Dark Blue type of color. They are a tad bit tight as Shourisha prefers to have pants like this. However the pants are long, they practically touch the ground that Shourisha steps upon thus he could easily trip over them if he wasn't careful. Around his waist there is a belt, seemingly matching his hat and collar. The belt falls off of Shourisha's figure as usually nothing special about it then to have more fashion sense. Shourisha wears sneakers, with a mixture of white and black and gives it a nice balance between the two, However Shourisha usually has those shoes off as he feels more constrained from moving due to the shoes and socks, so you could probably usually see Shourisha without his shoes or socks if you looked down to his feet which despite not having anything to cover them up while walking around, they seem pretty clean.

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Personality: Shourisha is composed, meaning that he is calm, cool, collected. Any kind of danger, even danger that would lead to his death won't be able to shake his reserve. He isn't easily surprised or disturbed, no matter what is going around him. This causes him not to get his emotions out of control and as well as his temper. Nothing evil about this right? This just makes him to be seen as if he has a ulterior motive of sorts, which he usually does. He is as well Dishonest, this makes him lie a lot. He also doesn't really care for others feelings. Also him being kinda dishonest, he is as well as Disloyal. He is someone who is not committed or faithful to a government, cause, ideal or a person. He only follows the road that best suits his current needs, total disregard to the effects it has on anything he may have spoken or dictated to him through terms of service.

Shourisha is Inconsiderate, he is thoughtless when it comes to others. Not caring at all what happens to another person due to his actions. He believes that he is the only one to be important. He is indifferent in a way, he has no particular interest, loyalties or liking of anything. However he wants to get the most fun out of his life, rule the world is definitely up there somewhere in this individuals mind. He is someone who thinks that he is following the right road, the road that everyone wants to be on, even if people would think of it more as a evil road. Shourisha is Nefarious. He is a fragrantly wicked person, most evil people aren't evil in their own minds but he takes pleasure in being wicked and impious. His style and charm hides his nefariousness from the eyes of people who happen to look unto him. He plots and schemes with no regard for anyone but himself. He is as well as paranoid of others, he believes that everyone is lying to him somewhat thus this makes him unable to fully trust anyone but himself. He is a Sadistic as well, he has a abnormal delight in cruelty. He would kick a cat or any other animal, push a old person to his knees for the fun of it. He wouldn't feel any remorse while doing it. He only cares for his own pleasure and will like and misrepresent his interest to hurt others both emotionally and physically. He is pretty intelligent as well, seemingly absorbing information like a sponge with water and remembering it for long periods of time.

Shourisha when banished from Soul Society for becoming a hybrid of a shinigami and Hollow fled to the human world being chased by all the shinigami and became a Rogue. He had lost his memories of his life from the many years of solitude and trying to live with his Hollow Self. The madness that the Hollow within him caused made him forget even that he is a Vaizard and now he lives the life as a normal human being. His Inner Hollow had not revealed himself for a while. His collar made it so that any high spiritual being would not confront him as his Reaitsu seems rather Weak thus allowing him to live the normal life in peace. His Reaitsu is strange to others as it seems as a Hollows and a Shinigamis so it can easily interest others. His old personality is now dead and gone away. Shourisha, he doesn't believe that anyone has the right to take a life. To cause terror in people, to fight, he doesn't believe in any type of violence. Although he is a quite skilled fighter himself, he doesn't want anyone to hurt anyone. He wants to live in a world with no wars, no stealing, no hate or anything of the sort. His goal in life is to make the world like he envisioned, but he doesn't want it to happen by violence. He wants to save everybody, it doesn't matter to him if they are *evil* in other people's point of view. He just wants to save everybody, disregarding what they've done in the past. What is the point in using your strength to cause death, destruction, hate, fear? He often asks himself that very question in his mind and to others who abuse their power. You should use your strength to make everyone happy. If someone does ever fight him, he just tries his best to not hurt them and disarm them. He doesn't want anyone to get hurt or worst to die. He won't ever stop fulfilling that dream of his to create the ideal world. Most people like Shourisha a lot, mostly because of his personality, he is sweet in general and he cares about anything that breathes life. Shourisha usually helps people around in Karakura Town, he will help out with anything. Even if there's a chance he may die, Shourisha is perfectly harmless. Kids play with him sometimes, they wrestle around with Shourisha. Shourisha doesn't quite like it, having about 15 kids on himself and bending his arms and legs and taking him to the ground. But nonetheless he has fun along with the children who mean no harm. However if someone ever hurts one of his friends, he will do whatever he can to help protect them. Without Hesitation he would kill. He wants strength to help protect those that he holds dear.


Inner Hollow Personality: Shourisha with no memories of his Shinigami Life or being a Vaizard has no clue that he even has a Hollow within himself. Obviously he has no control of his Hollow which has not spoken to him in the past while and so he cannot even bring out his Hollow Mask to help him fight.

His Hollow has nothing on its mind besides killing and fighting. Strategies he cares not, if you manage to out power your opponent then there's nothing to worry about would be the logic of Shourisha's Hollow. He did not speak to Shourisha ever since he lost his memories of his being of a Vaizard and even Shinigami. His Inner Hollow awaits for Shourisha to learn his Zanpakutou's name and to get rid of the collar which keeps his Hollow at bay. Once all those requirements would be filled out he would start taking action of gaining control of his body and using it to fight and cause more destruction.

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Fighting Style: Shourisha uses his fist to fight as he has no idea that he is a Shinigami or Vaizard thus he does not use a Zanpakutou or even know the name of his Zanpakutou and he cannot use his Hollow Mask. He basically only uses his first to fight. He tends to subconsciously add small amounts of Reaitsu into the part of his body which is attacking or dfending thus creating more power or reduce any damage inflicted upon him.

Background: Shourisha, how did the light, become so dark?

Shourisha, he didn't had a normal childhood like any other boy. Where did he come from? Just who is he? No one truly knows who Shourisha truly is. Shourisha seems like a harmless boy, however he isn't. There used to be a village, a village of a ancient tribe of people who clearly believe in the gods, this was a small but yet prosperous village. It was a village where no one had any out of the ordinary heritage, where everyone was just normal people under the guide of the village chief. This village was located in the desert, very close to a oasis. Back when the village was first born, the ancestors of the village chief were prophets and priestess's, it was told that on the 18th generation, the second child of the descendant from that century would be the embodiment of every sin that humanity has ever committed. This child was to be sacrificed to the gods to pardon humanity for its sins. One day the village chief and his wife had a child, by the name of Shourisha. He was the second child, he would eb sacrificed to the gods when he came to age of 18 years old, to die the most painful and longest death. The parents knowing that this was supposed to be done when he was of age, thought they may as well make his life as perfect as they can before he would be to be sacrificed to the gods, the other villagers agreed as well to take good care of the child. However, Shourisha's older sibling was jealous of him. As now the people of the village were more talking about Shourisha then the older sibling. However as years passed by, the older sibling's jealousy and envy disappeared. Shourisha was respected and quite well liked throughout the village, others would often play games with him and he would be happy. At least appeared happy. When Shourisha was eight years old, something happened to the village. It was destroyed. Who did it? Was it Shourisha? How? It was indeed that Shourisha was the one that destroyed the village and no one else. However, Shourisha at the age of eight couldn't possibly destroy the village all by himself, neither would someone of the village help him accomplish it. All he did was say a few things here and there and watched as things unfolded. People killed one another, people who used to be friends, lovers. People killed children, their own family and even Shourisha's father and mother. The village was in a state of chaos, the village was burning to the ground and everything was disappearing from his life. The faces, people he knew and people that loved him died. Those faces that he saw suffer and die... This made Shourisha feel so alive. As he was gazing at the village from a safe distance, observing what is happening. Why? Why did Shourisha do it? He knew what was gonna happen to him and he sure wasn't gonna let it happen, besides... he's the embodiment of every sin that humanity has ever committed, of course he would be evil. He laughed, laughed loudly where if anybody in the village that was still alive could hear it.

Hehehehehe... Hahahahahaha!

This was what made his blood boil, what made him tremble with excitement! This is what he loved, this is power that he wants! He laughed as this made him feel truly happy, where everyone he knew died and suffered. At least he thought, one of the villager's managed to survive this. His sibling. However Shourisha was pretty sure that everyone was dead and so he gathered up provisions and water. He was gonna travel, he was gonna find other things that bring him such excitement. That's all he wanted. He set out into the desert, days have passed and his provisions were getting low, but nonetheless he knew what to do. He found a way to salvage the food and water that he had left and managed to come up with a way to survive for roughly around two weeks. However two weeks have long since passed and he still hadn't seen a village, let alone a traveler. His hunger, his need of water and his fatigue brought him down unto his knees. Is it Karma? he thought to himself before his body fell down unto the sandy floor of the desert. He never believed that God existed, if he did then he was one cruel god. Why must good people like from his own village die, they had never done anything bad and were good but God didn't do anything to stop Shourisha. This was Shourisha's theory on God, there's a chance he might exist but if he does he is obviously cruel. Shourisha wasn't expecting anyone to save him from the brinks of death, especially since he was lost and in the middle of the desert. He slowly succumbed to sleep as he thought he might as well sleep while he dies. The next day, a stranger in a cloak that hid his face found Shourisha while he was walking towards somewhere, the stranger applied medical treatment and gave him food and water while he was unconscious.

The stranger then brought Shourisha along with him, the stranger walked for a few hours and he was facing apparently what seemed like a castle on the outside. In truth this was actually a Arena, where people are brought and forced to either do Manuel labor or fight to the death like gladiators. When Shourisha woke up, he looked around as he slightly and slowly lift himself from a bed. He was apparently in a prison cell. The stranger was in front of his cell, looking at Shourisha. His cloak's hood hid his face in darkness so Shourisha wasn't able to tell who it was. The stranger told him in exchange for saving Shourisha's life, that he would stay here for a while. Shourisha thought it was fair and agreed, but he wasn't sure what he was getting himself into. He was doing manual labor for a while, the labor that he had done greatly enhanced his physical prowess. When he was old enough, he started to be a Gladiator, the manual labor was certainly a great help as it helped prepare him strength wise. Shourisha was certainly a great fighter but there's always those that would be able to beat him in a fight so he improvised. He said things here and there and soon enough those that would be a nuisance to Shourisha were disposed of by large groups of people that he would be able to take care of if they should ever fight. One day, Shourisha said things here and there and people killed one another and Shourisha as usual just stood idle and watched the event that was going along with his default expression with closed happy looking eyes and a small smile. The guards came to check out the noise and saw that everyone was dead, Shourisha was the only one unharmed and there alive sitting in a corner with him hugging his legs with his default expression. The guards figured it must've been Shourisha that killed all these people and so Shourisha was turning into a celebrity and people from all over the country and others came to see him fight at the Arena. The Arena was doing good thanks to Shourisha.

Fights have been getting much easier for Shourisha, he was using the fear that he had create through the people of the Arena to his advantage. There were people who were stronger then Shourisha in terms of Strength but thanks to the fear that he had created, they were afraid of him and that very same fear made them that much weaker. He was a God here, he liked it. Power. Everyone feared him because of that power. This is what he likes. This is what he loves. This is what he wants. However, he knew that no matter how long hell stay here it won't satisfy his thirst for power. He wanted so much more, he wanted so much more that he couldn't take it. He did exactly what he had done to his home village. Say a few things here and there, and merely observe whats going to happen. The arena was in a state of chaos and everyone was dying, he was happy. This is what made him feel so happy. He laughed once more.

Hehehehehe... Hahahahahaha!

When he stopped laughing, he opened his eyes and realized something pretty important. He was still in his cell, locked in. The metal was reinforced type of steel so breaking that would be near impossibility for Shourisha. He looked around him, and he saw nothing more then a bed and a pillow and brick walls. Nothing here is gonna help him get out, was he stuck here forever? He decided he may as well figure out something in the morning, he was tired. So he walked towards his bed and then started to sleep in his usual fashion of sleeping to the left on his sides, thus facing the wall. The next day, he woke up early due to the smell of rotting corpses and insects and animals of the like chewing on the corpses. He looked under his bed because maybe there was a trap hole or something under it, but he was pretty sure that there wasn't any trap hole since its so cliché. However he did realize a crack in the brick wall, he moved his bed away to examine it better. He started to poke the crack and the crack grew bigger and he managed to pull the brick to himself and it reveal a passage hidden by Darkness, however its either going straight out, or falling down as he wasn't sure if the floor was there since it was so dark in there. However, he still went after there. But... instead... he was falling. However it wasn't that deep so Shourisha didn't die from falling but he did get a bit hurt. He walked along the darkness, following his instinct as he couldn't feel anything around him or even smell if there is fresh air. All he could do is rely on his intuition. He got out of there, guess luck is on his side. He then continued to travel, he traveled by foot and by boat. Going from land to land hoping to find something that may benefit him to his goal of absolute power. Like last time, he was getting tired, hungry and thirsty and he as the same as last time succumbed into darkness. However the stranger from before found him and dropped him off at the next town, Karakura. Shourisha ever since from then, worked jobs while attending high school and lived his life. However as he went to go back to his apartment through a dark alley he was mugged and killed for his wallet. He managed to hurt the muggers quite a bit but there were just way too many of them and all of them had small weapons such as knives and even some who had guns. He died and lived the life of a spirit for a while, that is when his dormant Reaitsu started and attracted Hollows. He managed to fight them off for a few years and then he was eatened and became a Hollow himself before Shinigami could come and bury his soul. He lived for years as a Hollow and became Powerful after eating both Plus's and Hollows a swell as other Shinigami which greatly boosted his strenght and even Lieutenants had problems with him and so the Captains were chasing after Shourisha who was known as the "Levia Hollow" . He knew he couldn't take the Captains on so he ran as soon as he felt enormous Reaitsu near him but he was eventually outsmarted and easily disposed of as a Hollow and his soul had been purified and then sent to Rukongai, 80th West District.

Shourisha due to the many years of immense Reaitsu could easily be recruited into the Shinigami Academy as he was always Hungry ever since he came to this world. He stole and ate. He was always hungry and he moved closer to the 1st District due to the better quality of food and less trouble he got from the people around him and he was finally recruited into the Shinigami academy. He was considered as a Genius as he managed to graduate the Academy in a year instead of the usual 6. There was one thing that was odd with him, he had the Reaitsu of what appeared to be both Shinigami and Hollow but no one paid much attention after all everyone's Reaitsu was different. The reason for this was the large consumption of Hollows when he was a Hollow and one of them was stuck in him after his purification and so he was a Vaizard. Many years passed and as expected he was a Captain of the 2nd Division, however he was seen to be a Vaizard and was branded as a traitor from Soul Society and he fled and hid. Due to the many years of banishment he eventually forgot about the shinigami and he also forgot he was one of them. His Inner Hollow drew him to madness and made him forget everything about his life and now he lives the life as a normal human. His collar made it so that other Hollows weren't interested in him all that much and kept him on the low profile from Shinigami around the place as well to keep his hollow at Bay. He is at Karakura Town, working at jobs to make some money and his unusual pattern of Reaitsu still remained thus many came to inspect him but due to the huge period of time of banishment from Soul Society no one remembers him.

P.S He needs a Trainer of sorts to help him learn about Shinigamis, Hollows etc... And reteach him his Shinigami ways and eventually control of his Inner Hollow Razz
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