Night, Alice, Marry. [Need to do bio.]

Posts : 2 Points : 0 Join date : 2010-05-08 Age : 28

Name: Alice Marry Night.

Age: 17

Years Since Gaining Superhuman Powers: Three Years.

Gender: Female.

Current Location: Japan.

Occupation: Alice owns a Candy store. [One she worked up to get money, and own herself.]

Rank: Regular.

Appearance:
Alice has long, blonde hair, with purple eyes. She stands at 5'2, weighting 100 pounds. She has a body of a dancer, with a some what large bust, and long legs, she mostly wears dresses, normal, or child like, she loves the way they feel on her tiny body, and the loseness. Alice, does at times, wear pants, and shirts, but this is only to sparr with, she will wear a lose shirt, that is tight where her wrists, waist, and neck are. Her pants are black, again, only tight at her waist, and ankels.

Personality: Split personality, which has two sides. To be able to tell the different sides, they will be different colors, Normal with look like this Alice. Child like will look like this Alice.]
Normal:
Alice is a sweet, loving, friendly girl. She would give an arm if it ment helping someone, she loves making friends, and meeting new people, she loves sports, and running around for fun, she loves to sparr, and work out, she is very fun to be around, and everyone likes her when shes like this, she means well, and loves anyone who comes around her really.
Child Like:
Alice is like a baby when she is in her child like personality, she is mean, and very jelouse. She gets mad really fast, and will do anything to make HERSELF happy, not caring if it hurts anyone else, she only matters. She loves playing games in the state, and will mostly throw fits if told no. She will cry, and scream, and pout. She hates the word no. And will slap, kick, and punch if told it, she is very touchy when it comes to other peoples things when she acts like this.

Fighting Style:
Alice is mostly about speed, mind games, and traps, with her small size, she normaly can't to head to head fighting. She likes to play games, with helps her alot, she loves to confuse the other person, but changing the style of her fighting, from speed, to traps, then to mind games, the order of these can be different depending on the mood Alice can be in, sins shes very child like when it comes to her personality, she loves to just play games, which, can come in help, at times. Other times, Alice is be found senting traps, these are really hard traps to find, or know about, one moment you could just be looking around, and the next you could find yourself in a net, maybe in a hole, or your shoes glued to the ground.

Mind Games: Alice likes to mess with people, this kind of fighting normaly only happens when Alice is in her "Child Like" state. When Ali is like this, she loves to make the other person feel scared, always saying things that they could be thinking, but only guessing, by putting herself in the place of them, she is wrong alot at times, it's only once in a blue moon she is right. Other times, it's about games, not really mind games, but real games, making the other person try to think of a number, or pick a card. This annoys the person very much, but gives Alice time to think on an way to fight them.

Traps: With Alice beening as small as she is, she loves to set traps, seeing she can't do head to head fighting, she needs to be sneaky, and do things the other person wont see coming, she loves using different ways for traps, sometimes there could be a hole in the ground, or maybe a rope in a tree, so if the person steps on the bottom of the rope, it will tie around their ankel, and hang them upside down.

Speed: Once again, with Alice's size, she needs to be fast, this is really hard to do, seeing that she has tiny legs, and doesn't move as far as a taller person, but she can move fast, most likely not as fast as she would want to move, she does need to stop and breath, but this is a down fall, because with Alice doing this, it makes it easier for the other person to sneak up behind her, and grab her.

Background:

Posts : 458 Points : 59 Join date : 2010-02-23

"she is very fun to be around, and everyone likes her when shes like this"

I think that's a grand place to start. Ignoring the grammar issues just in that sentence, and the spelling issues everywhere else, you also throw on what is either very poor wording, or the idea that you can speak for other characters. Then there's the 'circels' line, where sometimes she can make the foe dizzy? Pretty sure that doesn't work on the powerful beings who seem to be immune to the random perils of a normal human body. Even so, in order to do that, you'd have to move VERY fast, something that anybody with a human body wouldn't be able to do with a skill for it, especially at your age/level of power. Even before it gets to the background, I suggest you rewrite this. On top of that, I expect a really good explanation for the split personality, those signify deep emotional trauma.

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