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A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved)   Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Mar 04, 2010 12:12 am

Name: Denzeru Kishi

Age:110

Visual Age: 16

Rank:Espada

Aspect Of Death: Recklessness/Chance

Special Ability: Best Swordsmanship



Apperance: Denzeru Is caramel in complexion, and has deep brown eyes. He had black dreadlocks that reach to the top of his shoulders. He wears a white hooded jacket with black trimming, unzipped, and black t-shirt underneath. For leg wear he wears white jeans, with black stitching. On his feet is black gym sneakers, with white stripes located near the tip. Denzeru is at the height of 6”0 even, and has a trimmed body. Across his back is a diagonal scar, which is to this day unknown to him. Around his neck he wears a blood red scarf. Denzeru canine teeth are a little longer then average, and can be seen clearly while smiling. His ears are smaller then average, and tend to be picked on because of this fact. His mask cover the right side of his forehead, an red shooting star can be shown.


Personality: Denzeru is usually a “live in the moment” guy, never taking in the consequences of his own actions. He‘s never sitting in the same place for to long .Though he considered other’s lives a concern. He’ll step in the field of battle without the thought of tactics, just force, and pure luck. He considered himself the “coolest nerd” ever, enjoying video games, mangas, and food the most. He is nervous around beautiful females, and slurs his speech around them. He’s not really competitive, only wanting to have fun. He’s also a great fighter, and loves the thought of friendly combat. He laughs when he enjoys himself too much. He’s able to speak Japanese, though being American. Though he finds leadership a troublesome duty, and too much work, he’ll do it for the lives of his comrades. He is somewhat attracted to the stars,and how old they are and what they've seen. He once said "maybe I'll be one of them..." He also has an habit of standing in storms, and looking at them, he once was shocked by lightning.


Favorite Quote:"When everything is down, smile! There's nowhere to go but up. Dance with the uncoordinated, swim with the birds, fly with the fishes, and dance with fire...Never ever doubt yourself.

Fighting style: Denzeru is know as a reckless striker. He charges in without no sense of danger, which leaves him with many battle scars. He rarely uses kidou as he sees it as "pointless". He strikes with his weapon without fear, and shows little mercy towards his enemies. He stills find taking another life disgusting, but will do if needed.

Background: Denzeru was an young thrill seeker, and wanted to enjoy he’s life to the fullest. He was an average school student, who always looked for fun. He spentmost of his spare time doing extreme things, or either playing video games. If you wake him from his sleep, he wake in an outrage, and fall back into his deep slumber. One night he was walking through hometown of Chicago, Illinois and felt an sudden shock of force. As he turned around to see what object had made such a force he was stopped in his tracks. Then his world went suddenly black. “Crap” was the only thing he could say, before his body was split into half.

In Hueco Mundo Denzeru barely survived as a hollow. He feed off of weak and helpless souls. After wandering into the Menos forest, he was fused together with a collection of souls, and became a Menos Grande. Years, and years of feeding off of other Menos, and those foolish enough to enter the forest, Denzeru eventually saw his chance to takeover. He mentally fought his way to the top, striving to become the one with the strongest will. After decades of fighting Denzeru took over and became an Adjuchas. His body was grey in color, and his shooting star mask appeared. He had quills appearing from his body. During this time his curiosity for the main castle of Hueco Mundo sparked. So he dedicated years to getting to the inside, but to little prevail. After another decade he was visited by the Primera Espada himself. Rubicaante Mammond had given him the option to have the ability to tear off his mask. Denzeru took the offer without hesitation, and took a month to learn the ability. The moment Denzeru torn off the mask a surge of energy rushed into his body. The action had made an black “3” appear next to the scar on his back, and the whole on his shoulder burn. Denzeru had become the number three Espada, He became the Tercero. “This is going to be a riot!” Denzeru said


Done! Can you guys tell me if I'm missing something, or if I need to change something?


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PostSubject: Re: Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved)   Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Mar 04, 2010 9:53 pm

This looks good, but the hollow part of your backstory will have to be tweaked:

1) You don't just transform from any normal hollow into a menos grande. A menos grande is made up of numerous souls of hollows. If one of these souls gains dominance over the others, then that menos grande becomes a Adjuchas.

2) Again, on this forum adjuchas don't just turn into arrancar either. Change it so that as an adjuchas he meets the Primera Espada, who teaches him how to tear off his mask to become an arrancar.

3) Take out the part of taking down other arrancars, since there won't be any others until the Primera makes them. Since we only have two espada, you can unanimously be the Tercera.

Make these changes, and I'll be back to look at it again.
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PostSubject: Re: Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved)   Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Mar 04, 2010 10:51 pm

OK, everything has been corrected, so:

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PostSubject: Re: Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved)   Denzeru Kishi (Arrancar) (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Mar 04, 2010 10:59 pm

*Does happy dance*
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