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Bleach: Awakening of the Elder Ones

A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Yuushou (Approved)   Yuushou (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 12:54 pm

Name:Yuushou(brave, great soldier)

Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Yuushou takes the form of a great lion.

Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Yuushou is a very honorable spirit, one that would take the high road, even if it was the hardier path to follow.

Release Phrase: Roar, Yuushou

Family: Sound?(i guess)
Level: Bankai

Sealed Zanpakuto: stays in released state, but disappears, until Auron calls for Yuushou.

Shikai:
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Shikai Ability: When striking anything, Auron's sword sends a vibration of sound through what ever it hits. Making what ever's hit molecular bond lose from the sound vibration. Thus causing Auron's sword to slice through things in an amazing pace. Other then that its a cool looking sword that's very heavy.

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Bankai Release Phrase: Hear my call King, Yuushou!

Bankai Ability: Same ability as the shikai.


Techniques:
(Shikai)
King's Roar- Auron focuses his energy through his sword and sends a blast of sound through his sword and slashes it at the target. Causing them to shake abruptly, shaking there organs, to shaking there skeleton. CD-2 turns

(Bankai)
Death's Call- A sound that can't be heard by anyone, fills the area. This sound causes them to lose there ear balance(which controls all balance for the body). They lose speed and guidance. CD- 5 turns Charge Time- Instant Duration-2 turns(maybe don't really know what would be reasonable)

God's Roar- Sends a stronger form of King's Roar. But in Bankai God's Roar can be held in the blade, until Auron chooses to release it. He can still strike with his sword when God's Roar is in use. CD-4 turns


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PostSubject: Re: Yuushou (Approved)   Yuushou (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 1:53 pm

I am confused on how a vibration of sound would make your sword slice through things easier. If the blade itself just vibrated at high speeds that would make sense. But a vibration of sound doesn't work that way.

First I am confused what a half sheep hand sign is. I have never heard of that before. And blasts of sound can't actually slash someone. They could be used as a distraction or the way you used it to mess with their ears, but it still isn't corporeal. So maybe try thinking of a different tech?

Also need a duration on Death's Call unless it is instant.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuushou (Approved)   Yuushou (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 3:44 pm

Alright changed how the zan worked. Also I changed how King's Roar works, with a more in depth telling of it's function.

And a Half-handed sheep sign(its called sheep, goat, or ram)

he's a link to a list of hand signs with the full handed sheep sign.
http://www.endless-naruto.com/Naruto-Hand-Seals.html
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PostSubject: Re: Yuushou (Approved)   Yuushou (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 4:30 pm

Alright, so basically your sword disrupts people internally rather then doing large amounts of external damage. I can go with that. Saying that the sound vibrations can shake atomic bonds seems a little over the top but this is Bleach. However, I am going to warn you right now, I am going to be watching that you don't go overboard with that.

The two roar techs do internal damage which is fine. But for the love of the lords, get rid of the half handed sheep sign. This is Bleach, not Naruto. Hand signs just make you look silly.

Also up the cool downs on the roars to two and four respectively. Don't want you spamming a move that does internal shaking.

Just change those small things and I shall approve.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuushou (Approved)   Yuushou (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 4:40 pm

Okay got the changes done, also hand signs don't have to be associated with naruto. The only reason I gave that site was because it was the first one that I saw with a good showing of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuushou (Approved)   Yuushou (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 4:44 pm

Meh.

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