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Bleach: Awakening of the Elder Ones

A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Claiming thy Power (Approved)   Claiming thy Power (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 24, 2010 3:14 pm

Las Noches, the only building throughout Hueco Mundo, its builder unknown and its date of construction of unknown, this dome has hosted various Vasto Lorde over the course of time.All of them have been revered for their explicitly long idleness.They rarely, if not never, did anything.Even the hollows guarding them adopted their idle behaviour in no time.They have been standing there so as to defend the dome and the Vasto Lorde from any attacks.

This prolonged idleness was about to end;Bracamarte was about to permanently change the statistics.Descending from the slope and running toward the dome's entrance, he hold his katana firmly with his right hand.Four hollows were guarding the door and attempted to prevent him from entering.As a response, Bracamerto arranged for them a personal meeting with his blade.The first hollow was beheaded, while the second one received his downward slash, which separated it into two pieces.The rest panicked and attempted to flee, but he caught up with them , slicing the one from the waist and down and piercing the other one's forehead.

Running toward the narrow corridor leading to the main hall, he encountered five more hollows waiting for him, charging toward him with rising hands and opened mouths.The first one that came in physical contact with him got bashed, its skull contorted by the powerful blow and was sent flying away.Charging at the rest of the hollows, he thrusted the blade deep at their waists.Before their top halves could fall down,they almost instantly vanished.

As he ascended the stairs,he finally found him,his long-awaited target.He was sitting on his throne,his eyes fixed on Bracamerto.He slowly raised his right hand and let it fall instantly.Hollows appeared from nowhere, apparantly waiting hidden till he arrives, and leapt at him.He leapt likewise and prepared himself by placing his katana near his wait.He performed an upward slash, slashing all the hollows in front of him.Then placing his blade on his right flank, he performed a slash from right to left.He landed safely on the floor, as behind him a huge pool of blood was formed.Staring the Vasto Lorde for a second, he charged at him with a rising katana.

The Hollow easily dodged the blow by stepping aside and letting his throne get cut instead, holding out his hand so as to pierce Bramarte's heart.Bracamarte countered his fatal blow with his left hand, managing to hold it back.He grabbed his hand firmly and attempted to pierce him with his blade.The Hollow headbutted him and vanished from his sight.Bracamarte absorbed the pain from the headbutt, slightly loosing his balance in the process.Suddenly, he swinged his blade against the broken throne and sent it swiftly flying to the Vasto Lorde.The Vasto Lorde used Sonido again and landed a few steps away from the ashes that remained of the throne.The Vasto Lorde smirked slyly in the thought that Bracamerto had underestimated him, but his smirk and thought was wipped out, as he realized in shock that a katana flew toward him, aiming his head.The katana was plunged on the wall, washed with black-red blood.The Vasto Lorde's head fel on the floor,echoing across the main hall.

Bracamarte pulled his katana out of the wall, putting it back into its sheath.He ascended the stairs and sat on the remaining portion of the throne.

"This dome from now and forever, will rightfully belong to me" he shouted coldly and his voice echoed throughout Las Noches.
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PostSubject: Re: Claiming thy Power (Approved)   Claiming thy Power (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 24, 2010 4:40 pm

Got some grammar issues and spelling issues but nothing deal breaking. However, you should make a space after the period at the end of sentences. Like so. I don't know why I never noticed that before.

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