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A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Gabriel Mistletien (Superhuman) (Approved)   Gabriel Mistletien (Superhuman) (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Apr 07, 2010 8:34 pm

Name: Gabriel Mistletien Alias: Mist Age: 22

Born: Oslo, Norway Current Location: Karakura Town

Years Since Gaining Superhuman Powers: 6

Gender: Male Current Location: Karakura Town.

Occupation: Writer and designer Rank: Superhuman

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He's a really carefree guy using his finance and savings to live. He like to spent his time when not working on his projects or lazying around on his flat, taking long walks through the parks and galleries across the town while talking with the sous he meets on his way. He may look cold and quiet to anyone who doesn't really know him, but is a very fun and loyal guy for those who know him, he learned to ignore things that he just don't like and others people do. Even not been way so reckoner he always stand out his creativity.

Fighting Style

He will only fight to protect his self or someone, he will never pick on or start a fight, he kinda prefer try to talk and end it like that than fighting against someone. He studied, forced by his father some of fencing fight and duel, and learned how to fight watching action movies. Always waiting his opponent to come near, so he can engage an attack in full power toward it.

Background

He was born within a rich family from Oslo, Norway and raised by his father as his mother died after she gave birth to him, he grow up feeling the contempt, hate and guilt imposed upon him by his brothers, turning into a very shy and timid person. Since child he always saw strange and almost invisible silhouettes around the whole place. His two brothers we're everything he wasn't athletic, popular, intelligent, there wasn't really anything he could try to achieve that his brothers haven't done yet, so he decided to follow his father as a great manager of a big company, like that he could stay next to him, and wouldn't need to work too much or at least he thought so. But he wasn't really good at maths and economy, and ended applying for arts in school, he always enjoyed his time working on his projects at home or school.
One day, when he was sixteen, he was about the be bullied as usually in his school corridors when something was different, as he closed his eyes and took a deep breath waiting for the incoming of the usual heavy punch on his belly or face, but he didn't felt anything or could hear anyone around anymore. As he opened his eyes he saw yourself surrounded by trees, he had suddenly appeared in the park behind his school noticing a strange dark energy flowing around his body and then disappearing, while a bunch of strange persons with chains coming out of their chest started to come out from behind some trees looking at him.
After that scene, rumors about how he disappeared grew fast, some cool ones which told that he was a magician and others about he been an alien or in fact a ghost or a government experiment, not being disturbed or bullied by anyone anymore in his school.

He started to meet all the souls around his town, he knew how much they've felt alone without no one around to talk with them, most of time he looked like a complete idiot talking alone on the streets while others walked by him. He heard from a wandering soul who had broke its chain about a place called Karakura with great activity of hollows and others strange things. He didn't know what hollows we're, his town was small and the souls usually stayed quiet waiting for the time when they would go away. So he decided to go away on a trip to Karakura, after all, his father and brothers wouldn't mind at all his absence.

As he reached it, he had never felt such energy condensed around one place as Karakura Town. He was walking in a near restaurant when a large black monster with a weird white mask appeared just in front of him, destroying part of the building as it managed to attack him. He suddenly realized that only he could see that monster and started to call it far away from those people, as it seemed to be behind him since from the begin. After they reached a small and empty soccer field he instantly transformed and stood waiting, as he large monster came near he raised his hand and shoot a big blast of energy incinerating it, before he fell on his knees and thought that he should have used far less energy for that. As he took some breath, a man who watched everything approached him and asked if he would like to join others like him. After fighting that strange creature he sure was more than interested to know more about others like him and about those monsters. He joined them, but he didn't want to bear any responsibilities, he never showed his total capacity to anyone, except to that man, he always tried to hide the full extension of his powers staying as a regular superhuman at least until now.


(working on it and i'll clean the errors soon kuro ^^)


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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Mistletien (Superhuman) (Approved)   Gabriel Mistletien (Superhuman) (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Apr 08, 2010 12:29 am

Alright, the grammar errors are pretty numerous but not enough to make me want to cry. Mostly just run-on sentences and the like.

I like the reason for why he is only a simple Superhuman. Though I do think that the "gains powers while being bullied, isn't very interesting or original. But you don't need to change it if you don't want to.

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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Mistletien (Superhuman) (Approved)   Gabriel Mistletien (Superhuman) (Approved) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 11, 2010 5:00 pm

well at least now that i've used that no one will try to use something like it too Hit Floor so its a good thing in the end ^^
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