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A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Ranryou Roga (Approved)   Ranryou Roga (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Feb 18, 2010 12:47 am

Name: Ranryou Roga

Age: 364

Visual Age: \Early Thirties

Years since Entrance In Soul Society: 340

Gender: Male

Division: 2

Rank: Captain

Appearance: Ranryou Roga (Approved) Bleachoccaptainsuzabysu

Personality: Tho a perfectionist Ranryou has shown that he is a little on the "off" side. Even feloow Captain have called him brainless unless faced with a challenge. Captain Roga for the longest has been seen a scary fellow. Most meeting him for the first time feel uneasy about the color of his eyes. Tho being creepy at time Roga is a quiet Captain. Always smiling, and seeming to be in his own world. It is known that he finds stupidity disdainful, and immature. Those getting to know the Captain know him as carefree, and focused. Taking his job as Captain serious enough to train his Squad himself. Running training sessions during there off-time.

During a time of conflict Roga has prove to have a skill in making plans, and coming up with way to turn a situation in his favor. Combined with lightning fast reflexes, and a Mastery of Hoho Captain Roga a very powerful opponent, and Captain.

Favoring to have as less injured as possible Roga has given orders to his Squad to stand down or to leave him behind to fight a stronger opponents. Most think it's for time to let them escape but it's truly because Ranryou's Zanpakuto doesn't care who's around. When it activates any around could be killed. For this the Captain will move out on his own. Or at the very least arrive before his comrades. Giving him time to fight or finish it off without putting anyone else in harms way.

Fighting Style: Captain Roga has an impressive, and almost god-like mastery of Hoho, and Zanjutsu. His Shinpo being one of the best in Soul Society. It is known that Ranryou is a master at Shinpo, and a master assassin. Not finding it cowardly to attack from behind, or to even rush his enemy. Anything to get the job done in a swift amount of time. It's been known that Ranryou can use his shinpu to take down multiple enemies while still seeming to be stationary. The full extent of his Shinpu has yet to be seen by his fellow Captain's, or squad members.

As Captain of the 2nd squad Roga had to have a mastery of hand to hand as well. Using his legs, and a more instinctual fighting style. Not thinking, and just fighting. Allowing his full potential to awaken.

in terms of battle knowlegde Ranryou can easily notice the little facts about his enemy, and fight to bring those disadvantages to the limelight.

Background: At birth Roga's mother died. Ranryou was given to his grandparents, and lived with them in Karakura town. There he noticed he could see things out of the norm. For example when he was 6 he first made contact with an older man looking for his daughter. It came to be that his daughter had been killed by the same murderer that took his life. It was then that Ranryou came to meet a Soul Reaper. He was so cool dressed in his black clothing, and his sword on his waist. Ranryou knew that if he could he would become what that man was. A superhero.

At 13 Ranryou made a few more encounters but nothing like this. While walking home from school Ranryou noticed a group of dogs it seemed eating from the same pile. Yet before walking away Ranryou heard the cries for help. They were eating a man. Racing to the scene Ranryou tried to kick the dogs off. Only to have his body thrown half across the river bank. it was then that Ranryou knew they were not dogs.

Before being killed by the creatures Ranryou began to lose consciousness. The last thing he saw was a man in black clotheing stand between him, and the creatures.

More years passed, and Roga found himself at 24. His grandmother had passed some odd years ago, and now his grandfather was on his death bed. With his last breathe he told Ranryou to keep his head up, and to follow his dreams. Leaving behind his home, and everything to Ranryou.

Overcome with grief Ranryou roamed the town without a purpose. He was sad he lost his family, and had no one else. It took him some months to cheer up.

The day he died Ranryou was at his job simply working. From outside a truck came flipping into his office building. Him working security. It crushed him flat. Killing him instantly.

Ranryou awoke in Soul Society. in the worst kind of place. There was the smell of death all around. And an odd hunger in his pit. Knowing he was dead Ranryou wanderer around for what seemed like years. Without knowing it had been five years. Before long Ranryou had formed his own little gang of misfits. Robbing, and taking what they needed.

As a few more years Ranryou had heard stories of the ones in black. The Shinigami. He knew then that it had been a shinigami that had saved him during his life. With hope in his eyes Ranryou joined the Academy. Rising to the top of his classes, and graduating in four years

During his time in school Ranryou was shown to be a natural at Shinpo, and Hoho. Going whole training periods without taking a single hit. With a combination of Impressive hand to hand Ranryou could take on armed opponents with relatively no effort behind it.

As time passed on, and months turned into more months Ranryou's growth only increased. At the start of his second year Ranryou began to take in interest in Kido. even tho he proven to have average skill. Being an expert. having enough skill to preform high level spells, but with "wavering" effects. So without really trying Ranryou pushed Kido behind him, and focused on his Zanjutsu. Which he grew quite fond of as his classes began taking missions to the real world, and what not. It was at the end of his second year that Ranryou learned the name of his Zanpakuto.

Third year. Ranryou's skilled were well above that of many seated officers, and rumors were that he could graduate in only three years. Some believed he could have the previous year. And some didn't even think he need to come to school. Still this didn't effect Ranryou in the least. He was a perfectionist, and therefore tried his hardest to be perfect in very manner. Valuing speed, power, and deception over a straight-forward actions. During his training his thrid year Ranryou had mastered his shikai to the point where he could release by only saying it's name. He found his Zanpakuto to be a little "unsettling"

Fourth year Ranryou simply smashed everything around him. Training missions became to easy, and even some of his mission with real squads had grown tiring. Ranryou didn't really care for the east jobs. He wanted to find his true potential. So at the end of the year Ranryou left the academy to join the 5th squad. Where he served as it's 4th seat. Tho his skills were higher then his squad Vice-Captain, and 3rd seat.

After sometime as a 4th sea Ranryou was transfered to the 2nd squad. Where he served as it's 3rd sit. Head of the Detention Unit. Here his skills were tested. Having to fight against unarmed enemies without his weapon grew interesting for Ranryou. He enjoyed this job yet also longed for more. Not feeling like he had reached his highest ability. It would be another year before he would become Vice-Captain of the 6th division, and then finally Captain of the 2nd.


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PostSubject: Re: Ranryou Roga (Approved)   Ranryou Roga (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Feb 18, 2010 1:16 am

I have a couple issues with your character.

First off, he is too old to look that young. At 600 he should look in his late forties or early fifties. So either make him look much older, or half his age.

Second, your character's death doesn't make that much sense. If he died 600 years ago, he wouldn't have been killed by a truck running him over. Maybe a horse trampled him instead?

Third, you seem to have your character excel at everything. He is a natural at Hoho and Shunpo, and a master at Kido and Zanjutsu. And you also had him graduate in a year and a half while usually it is six years?

Too overpowered for my taste. I understand that the second captain is of course going to be really strong, but there needs to be something he isn't good at. Maybe decrease how strong he is a Kido or something else? And please up the number of years in the Academy to four. I don't care how much of a prodigy you are, they aren't going to let you go through that quickly. There are a lot of things that need to be taught that aren't combat related and they are also going to want to have time to observe so they don't bring in someone that could later become a bad seed.

Change those things and I will approve it.
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PostSubject: Re: Ranryou Roga (Approved)   Ranryou Roga (Approved) Icon_minitimeThu Feb 18, 2010 3:29 pm

Alright the changes are satisfactory to me. Just don't have him act too overpowered during the actual Roleplay and everything will be fine.

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