Virgil Crowley's Abilities (Approved)

Name: Titan's Rage

Appearance: Virgil's physical appearance doesn't change very much, with the exception of some bony outgrowths from his shoulders, forearms, and knuckles. Aside from the outgrowths, his eyes tend to turn entirely black, giving him an inhuman look. The muscles in his arms also tend to grow a bit bigger when this is activated.

Ability: Virgil's spiritual energy increases his strength drastically, allowing him to pick up massive objects (busses, cars, etc,) with a small amount of effort. His durability is enhanced as well, allowing him to take a good number of hits before his body starts to give in. While in this form, he can also run twice as fast as normal, and his bones become stronger as a result. He can also channel his spirit energy into either arm for a more devastating punch, or ever other body parts to increase their resistance to pain.

Techniques:

-Gaia's Gambit-
Virgil uses his other-wordly strength to smash his foot into the ground, and summon loose chunks of earth from it. After selecting a few targets, Virgil then kicks the rocks towards his opponents. If he so chooses, Virgil can also pick up these boulders and use them as weapon. This move takes 4 turns to cool down.

-Kronos' Fury-
Virgil prepares himself, and begins to channel his innermost hatred into this technique. He channels this hatred throughout his body, and uses it to attack his opponent with an onslaught of kicks, punches, and anything else he can do to damage his foe. If possible, Virgil can bring a weapon into this technique, and works it into his attacks. This technique sacrifices strength in order to get more hits in. Takes 5 turns to cool down, and two turns to charge.

-Ultimate Technique: Atlas' Hammer-
This technique involves Virgil summoning all of his strength and spirit energy into a single punch, aimed right at the ground beneath him. While it wouldn't appear to do much, the blow sends the ground shaking fiercely. The resulting earthquake also has a potential to cause falling debris, which also adds to the danger. This move requires one turn to prepare, lasts 3, and has a 9 turn cooldown.

Brute strength, I think thats what your character is all about, but you utilize different types; such psychic natured and lighting natured;


The first technique; Everything is okay until you say that he can snap his fingers to send rocks flying toward targets and scatter to smouler rocks. That makes it seem like you are possessing psychic techniques. AND WHY SNAPPING? I MEAN CLAPPING IS DONE MORE EASILY.

Well you can fix it by either saying that after he smashes his foot, he sends those chunks flying towards his enemies by kicking them?

The second technique; you cannot say that lighting flows in his body and accelerates his speed but you can say that he solely focuses on increasing his speed by decreasing his strength( an idea).

The Ultimate;

ITS OVER 9000 THOUSAND; *breaks his scouter*

Okay, I can understand the fact that your punch is pretty strong that can cause an earthquake( you can keep the part about being powerful than a common earthquake, but decrease the radius of your technique) but summoning stone pillars and geysers of lava is just, OVERPOWERED $H!T.

Well, I think your character is mostly a man who relies on brute force, if I am correct.

I call that APPROVED, all necessary changes are made.

All that remains is a practice fight with one of our members, even an admin if you want to, and you can join the RP!

I would like to see a turn charge time on Kronos', as well as my personal comment on it...