Hezro "Sin" Hittori (Approved)

Name: Hezro "Sin" Hittori

Age:214

Visual Age: early 30's

Years in Soul Society: 145

Years Since Banishment:79

Gender:Male

Former Division: 6th

Former Shinigami Rank: regular

Rank: low elite (I assume this based on number of current Vaizards)

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Appearance: Sin wears black pants and a plain white shirt.He wears black military boots that are tied by three ring hooks along the laces of the boots. Sin wears two belts in a cross shaped fashion. Sin also wears a black leather jacket with a fur collar.He also wears a silver necklace. The silver necklace is a silver chain with a silver pendant. the pendant is an image of a cross that becomes a sword, symbolizing divine judgment.He wears black gloves on occasions. Sin is 5' 11" and weights 157 pounds. He has cold Grey eyes and a very lean body type.He also has a scar diagonal across his face, positioned from the right side of the forehead down to the bridge of the nose He gained after hollowfication. Its origin is unknown to him.


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Personality: Sin is a very interesting man. He strongly values honor, dignity, and purpose. This is also contradicted with his lust for battle. He is one who loves fighting and war which makes the Vaizard race a deadly opponent for the coming days. He is also kind towards woman and children and always finds it hard to show anger in front of them. He tends to relax whenever he is alone yet works as hard as possible when on duty.If the leader
of his group were to fall in battle he would pick up exactly where they left off and try to bring order back to place before making any rash decisions.

Inner Hollow Personality: Sin has very good control over his inner hollow.He has accomplished this due to his years of dealing with the man. Despite his years of training in controlling it even the littlest but of anger can set it off again.He has learned to keep his cool to prevent this. Sin's hollow is a berserker of sorts, attacking everything in sight.He finds pity a sign of weakness and will do whatever it takes to defeat the enemy be it be by traps to cheap shots.

Inner Hollow Appearance: a simple negative of Sin

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Fighting Style: Sin fights without emotion,since anger is a weakness. He goes for kill shot over anything else but only when he has a sure fire shot. He blocks with one blade while attacking with the other or blocking with both. He keeps to a defensive stance during battle and will usually use a bakudo to bind the target then finish it with a kill shot. He only donnes his mask in extreme conditions when he has no other choice, viewing it as a last resort. He rarely uses hado and will only go on the offensive when he finds his opponent deals with very aggressive attitude. In this situation he finds its need to attack fire with fire so to speak.

Background:
Before Academy Days


Hezro grew up in an average house as an only child in North Rukongia. His father had always dreamed of being a shinigami, but never had the chance to do it. With this in mind he taught Hezro all the man different stories of shinigami and how they killed monsters called hollows. Soon Hezro learned to love the shinigami just as his father had and they would do what Hezro's father called "training" which involved sword fights with large sticks. Hezro learned quickly how to dodge his fathers blows until he was a master at dodging. His father was thrilled and took him to the shinigami academy when he was old enough.

Academy Days


Sin was excellent with hidden combat and quickness when it came to the entrance exams. He was placed in the advanced courses due to his high marks in defensive techniques.He was a perfect candidate for division 6 and focused on soul society laws and regulations. He tended to keep to himself and hardly had any free time due to him studying so hard. He wanted to learn all he could while he was here. When it came to kido he focuses on bakudo, he appreciated the binding arts much more than that of hado. He even practiced in the Zanjetsu training with other advanced candidates, greatly outmatching them in almost every aspect of fighting. He was excellent at hand to hand combat.He graduated as second in the class.Only days before graduation He obtained his shikai something that caused quite a commotion. It greatly influenced his positioning into the gotei 13 ranks.

Hollowfication

Hezros in counter with Hollowfication was quite different from others. He was ordered to execute a rogue shinigami in the world of the living. He tracked the man down and found him to be a Vaizard. The two fought for hours before Hezro fell to the mans blade. He pitied him and made him choice between joining his ranks or death. Hezro, being a man of sound mind, accepted hollowfication.Being a man of honor,He kept his promise with the man. Partially because of his honor and also a small hint of wanting to grow strong enough to beat him someday .He snuck out of Soul Society the following day to start his training in Hollowfication. His hollowfication resulted in many buildings and areas destroyed, due to his hollows destructive nature. upon becoming a Vaizard he changed his name to "Sin" as a finalization that he was no longer a shinigami. It was his way of parting with his past life for his new one amongst the other Vaizards.

First off, your inner hollows personality really doesn't make that much sense. It is completely crazed which makes it easy to control? That is rather contradictory.

You need more on Fighting style. You can't just write two words for that section. Elaborate more, does he always focus on defense? Does he only use defense unless he is against a very weak opponent. Does he usually focus on defense but will take the offensive if given the chance? Does he use his blade, kidos, does he activate his mask often? Give me more.

He couldn't see her face due to the rules of engagement? The entire thing with that girl is either unnecessary since it doesn't show anything except that there was just one girl he couldn't beat. Or really should be elaborated on how she affected him. Did she make him want to train harder, did he have feelings for her? She is kind of just there in the backstory and takes up space without any real purpose.

The Vizard Maker is alive and well thank you very kindly. Don't try killing him off in your backstory! And hollowification is a pretty quick process. He wouldn't have been able to jump from Soul Society to the Living World really often. Once he had been changed into a Vizard, he would have joined the Vizard Ranks pretty soon after. The Vizard Maker would have led him to them.

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1. fixed as much as i can think of, not one thats good with persona's

2.Didn't realize u meant a paragraph or i would have done that first. sry

3.i just X'ed her out completely

4.forgot about him lol n i thought that would tie in the name change but i fixed it.

Alright, you didn't completely remove her but it is fine. I still think that he probably would have been changed right then though. Because if he was allowed to leave back to Soul Society, why would it be assurred he would come back? And why would he willingly go back to be changed? Why not just say you failed and have someone else be sent?

So I think you should change that in some way. Either that he is threatened or liked the idea of becoming much stronger (since he was only a regular shinigami) or that he is changed right there.

Besides that it is good. Change that and I will give the approval stamp.

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APPROVED

Umm. why did you quote yourself? Did you want me to look at something?

idk really, i can't delete it either