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A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Auron Hitori (Approved)   Auron Hitori (Approved) Icon_minitimeTue Mar 30, 2010 3:06 pm

Name:Auron Hitori

Age: 700
Visual Age: 40

Years since Entrance into the Gotei 13:650

Gender:Male

Division: 7th

Rank: Captain

Appearance:
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Personality: Auron is the type to watch and learn. From being countering intelligence to gathering intelligence. Always using his intelligence for fighting or to just down right seeing through the lies. A man with few words but words always filled with knowledge. When having to teach or order his subordinates, he takes no heed in telling whats wrong but being straight forward as possible. Auron is a man of action, believing that actions speak louder then words.

Fighting Style:When fighting Auron takes no heath in striking. Finding the opponents weakness and using it against them. Auron is a master of close combat, also from years of experience Auron has learned to use his body parts in sequence with his sword skills. Thus using power to overwhelm his target with sword techs. and striking with leg kicks. But always keeping his left arm in his shirt, swing his sword with just one arm. Using his bodies momentum to bring bone crushing swings.

Background:
Before Death: Before Auron had died, he was a wondering swordsmen. He had fought in many wars and survived to only wonder around till the next outbreak of war. Fighting for whom ever paid him the most, known by all as a dangerous swords man. Living by himself and fighting by himself and dying by himself, could sum up most of his life. From being left to live alone at a young age, to having to learn swordsmanship by fighting and fighting and fighting. Auron fought his hole life on Earth, to only die fighting in a battle.

After Death: Auron was a loner in Rukongai, fighting only for himself, but found himself in troubled situations many times. Knowing what honor was, Auron never killed innocent people, but only those that wished to do harm to himself or unarmed people. This "honor" would lead him to having his back against the wall.

One day Auron was wondering through the outskirts of Rukongai. Where he saw a group of people in what appeared to be a battle. The shinigami were fighting against a group of bandits. A group of 30 to 35 bandits fighting against 30 shinigami. Auron took caution against both groups. Watching these people from a distance, fighting to the death many were getting hurt. Auron only got closer to the fighting to the point he could almost touch them. But still hiding from there senses, he watched them closely. Auron watched for what seemed like an eternatiy of fighting, there was only one bandit left and 15 or so shinigami left. The bandit surrendered to the shinigami, but the shinigami didn't care. Screaming out for help the bandit scrambled to the tree behind him. The shinigami went forward to end the bandits life, until Auron stopped the shinigami's blade with his end of the hilt on his blade. Never kill an unarmed person, wheres your honor!? The shinigami looked at Auron with anger, the shinigami pressed forward with a violent swing of his sword. Auron slapped such a wide swing with his open hand. "Stop!" Both Auron and the shinigami stopped in there tracks. As a new person entered the area, the shinigami answered the voice, "Yes, sir!" Lieutenant, this man is adding the bandit.
" The new voice or "lieutenant" showed himself, he was a strong looking man with a long scar upon his face. This man motioned for the shinigami to move, as he moved closer to Auron. The man began examining Auron with his eyes, as so did Auron. The man took a fighting position, the men around him moved out of the way.

They began fighting, striking with ferocious swings of the sword. As if two wild animals were fighting to the death. But suddenly they both stopped, both taking heavy breaths. They stepped into a stance, as if to say it was the last, a last strike, a strike of death. Before they could push of the ground towards each other, a man interrupted them. Auron looked at a shinigami with a white coat over his black robes. With a number 11 on it, this man stood tall over Auron. He pushed both men across the clearing with great power. It took a good second for them to stop the momentum. In that second Auron's life changed, the man in the white coat stated that he was watching from a far and that he takes full responsibility for his subordinates actions. And stated Auron a proposition, one of 3rd rank seat saved for him if he went through the shinigami academy. Auron looked at the man for a bit, thinking of what he would lose and what he would gain from taking the offer. He answered the man with a short yes and from there history.

With years spent in the 11th division, also moving up to the 11th lieutenant position. And then taking the newly opened 7th division Captain seat. Passing the captain test he began living his life as a the 7th division Captain. Being one of the longer seated captains in Soul Society, and time made his knowledge grow and to be respected by all shinigami.


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PostSubject: Re: Auron Hitori (Approved)   Auron Hitori (Approved) Icon_minitimeTue Mar 30, 2010 6:55 pm

Two issues with your backstory. First off, and this isn't exactly your fault you didn't know this, whoever gets the 9th captain's spot is going to just have been recently promoted since the previous one just got killed 3 days ago in story.

So you may want to choose another division or switch your backstory a bit.

Also you wouldn't be able to just immediately get the 3rd seat regardless of how strong you are. You would still have to first go through the academy so you actually know what you are doing as a Shinigami. So maybe just switch it so that the captain tells Auron that if he joins the Soul Society he will save the 3rd seat for him. Or just mention somewhere that he still had to go through the academy.

Besides that the profile is pretty good.
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PostSubject: Re: Auron Hitori (Approved)   Auron Hitori (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 11:47 am

Alright I changed my profile, so that he would be 7th division captain, if that is alright with you. And I was wondering is this character to old, or is that fine?
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PostSubject: Re: Auron Hitori (Approved)   Auron Hitori (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 31, 2010 1:44 pm

Maybe up the visual age to fifty or knock the Actual age to 500-600.

Besides that the changes are fine.

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