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A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: El Diablo Reservado (Approved)   El Diablo Reservado (Approved) Icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 6:22 am

Name: El Diablo Reservado (The Quiet Devil)

Release Phrase: Susurro (Whisper)

Represent: N/A

Family: Shadow/Darkness

Sealed Description:
El Diablo Reservado (Approved) ScreenHunter_01Oct161517
Like this, but the curve is slightly more pronounced.
The blade is made of a titanium/adamantium alloy plated with silver. The pommel and hilt are made of the same of the same thing but plated with white gold. The handle is made of black hickory condensed to the density of steel (blade is full tang). The handle is wrapped with hardened black leather, followed on the outside by a wrapping of purple silk for a more comfortable grip.

Released Description:
Faust retains his Khopesh. It is the same as before, but the pommel is now covered by Hollow mask-substance. Faust, meanwhile, looks very similar. The only differences are that his Mask fragment flows off of his hand to cover the handle of his Zanpakuto and his tattoos expand to cover his skin with the inky black substance h was made of as a Hollow. Because the change is minor and all of his abilities are passive, Faust can stay Released for long periods of time. In this form, neither Faust nor his Khopesh cast a shadow.

Resurrection Ability/Ultimate Attack:

Name: Anime la Noche (Animate the Night)
Description:
Faust gains control over all shadows/darkness within a one hundred yard radius. He can make them solid or semi-solid, he can move them, he can make them change shape, and he can stick something into one shadow and have it come out of another shadow under his control when he wants it to. Light weakens these constructs, but does not destroy them.
Type: Passive

Techniques:

Name: Paso de la Sombra (Shadow Step)
Description:
This ability governs Faust's movement. He gains the ability to teleport very quickly between the shadows in his control. When he moves like this, he moves at twice the speed of his Sonido. In addition to this, any movement he makes while released is completely silent.
Duration: One Post
Cooldown: Four posts
Type: Active

Name: Reino de la Sombra (Shadow Realm)
Description:
Faust gains the ability to put his whole body into a shadow. From there, he can come out of - or put a body part out out - any shadow under his control. To beter facilitate this, he can see out of every shadow he controls simultaneously while hidden in one.
Duration: Three posts or less
Cooldown: Three posts for every post spent inside
Type: Active

Name: Cautela Espiritual (Spiriual Stealth)
Description:
While using Reino de la Sombra, Faust's Reiatsu is completely cloaked. He can be sensed, but two requirements must be met first. First, the person must b more adept at snsing Reiatsu than Faust is at hiding it (bear in mind that Faust is fairly as he's had a century of practice and it's his innate ability). Second, the person more adept than Faust must be specifically looking for him or specificaly looking for the Reiatsu signature of an Arrancar. This technique can only be used in conjunction with Reino de la Sombra, and its cooldown is the same.
Duration: As long as using Reino de la Sombra
Cooldown: Same Cooldown as Reino de la Sombra
Type: Active


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PostSubject: Re: El Diablo Reservado (Approved)   El Diablo Reservado (Approved) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 1:04 am

Faust wrote:


Released Description:
Faust retains his Khopesh. It is the same as before, but the pommel is now covered by Hollow mask-substance. Faust, meanwhile, looks very similar. The only differences are that his Mask fragment flows off of his hand to cover the handle of his Zanpakuto and his tattoos expand to cover his skin with the inky black substance h was made of as a Hollow. Because the change is minor and all of his abilities are passive, Faust can stay Released for long periods of time.


like i said before... Ressurection usually change your body to its true form, youre not a shinigami to change only your sword -.-

Resurrection Ability/Ultimate Attack:

Name: Lacre de Regalos (Sealing of Gifts)
Description:
When this ability is activated, the blade begins to vibrate. In addition to making lacerations very painful due to the vibrations, it sends out a subsonic pulse which can target one person's(within a range of 50 yards from him) particular type of Reiatsu and Spiritual Pressure and seal it , making it impossible for him to use or summon any kind of energy like attack during that time, having to rely totally and only on its sword and fighting skills.

Faust also has his abilities sealed during that time, so while it is very effective against single opponents, multiple opponents are only slightly less formidable with one of their number powerless.
Duration - 3
Cooldown - 6


Faust is not affected by this pulse, as it originates from his own Reiatsu. Additionally, anyone who can grab hold of the hilt or handle of El Diablo Reservado are unaffected for as long as contact between the hilt/handle and the person's hand is maintained. Please note that this affect only happens if a person's HAND touches the hilt, thus it will not happen if a person only manages to touch it with their chest, head, toe, tongue, etc.
Deaf people are not affected.

Type: Passive


Techniques:

[u]Name:[/u] AbsorciĆ³n del Alma (Absorbtion of the Soul)
Description:
Faust has the ability to absorb power from anyone he kills while in Resurreccion. If he simply defeats someone, he gains no power. If he kills his opponent, or delivers the killing blow to anyone regardless of whether or not he was originally fighting them, he gains power equal to their total power. He also may gain an ability unique to that person (For instance, Nel's Cero Doble or a Shinigami's Zanpakuto - provided it was released at the time. If he gains a Shinigami's Zanpakuto like Metastacia gained Kaien Shiba's, he can only use Releases that he has seen. However, if he has seen Shikai for instance, he can use all Shikai techniques regardless of whether or not he saw them specifically.).
Type: Passive


[u]Name:[/u] Release Augmentation
Description: Like all Releases, Faust's comes with a power boost. While released, Faust's Strength and Speed are double what they are in his unreleased state.
Type: Passive

no need all the releases do that

just try to work more on other techs


And I posted before you say it


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PostSubject: Re: El Diablo Reservado (Approved)   El Diablo Reservado (Approved) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 3:39 am

Did you post that after I said I was going to completely redo this, or before?
Anyway, it's completely redone.
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PostSubject: Re: El Diablo Reservado (Approved)   El Diablo Reservado (Approved) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 3:09 pm

I am not bothered by the fact that we have a user who is dead and unluckily has a shadow typed weapon.

But what does not obey the common welfare is the grim fact that they are too strong. Two passive techniques are strictly forbidden. Techniques are active skills not passive ones.

My proposal is simple;

turn them to active ones
provide

at least 3 turns cooldown and duration must not surpass 3 posts to the current passive ones.

also increase your active one's cooldown by 1 turn.
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PostSubject: Re: El Diablo Reservado (Approved)   El Diablo Reservado (Approved) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 4:32 pm

Alright. Of the three, two are now active and one is Passive (By Passive, I mean the duration is "Battle".). The active ones have very short duarations and long cooldowns. All in all, I think it balances out.
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PostSubject: Re: El Diablo Reservado (Approved)   El Diablo Reservado (Approved) Icon_minitimeSun Jun 20, 2010 4:47 pm

Fair Enough

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PostSubject: Re: El Diablo Reservado (Approved)   El Diablo Reservado (Approved) Icon_minitimeWed Jul 28, 2010 2:21 pm

Third Technique added.
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