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Bleach: Awakening of the Elder Ones

A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Matanza Mata RP sample (Approved)   Matanza Mata RP sample (Approved) Icon_minitimeFri Apr 23, 2010 6:05 pm

The night was young, the moon had only just touched its peak in the sky. When suddenly a garganta opened above the bell tower of a small peacefull country village. The darkness that ruled in the garganta was broken by a figure that jumped out, The figure landed in the middle of the air and squated down. "Primera said to quitely take out the shinigami sentry that gaurds this area" A grin appeared on the face of a small girl, she looked 21 but was only 1,55M tall "Well, Mata can't help it if he flees. Then Mata will need to chase him, Can't help it that some noice is created during the 'chase'" With a smile she glided until she set foot on the ground.

With no reason to hide she unleashed a large amount of reiatsu, it was not before long a shinigami attacked her from behind. Mata drew her sword and hit the blade's edge with her own hilt and bumped it up in the air. Instead of finishing it with that and slash him in half, she did what she had planned for some more fun. She hit him with the back of her sword and he flew a few meters before landing on his back. "Woud you be so kind and run away" She grinned as she planted her sword an inch before the shinigami's face.

The shinigami turned pale and lifted himself up "G-G-Get away" yet he did stand firm. "These strong of mind shinigami are really a pain" she unleashed her full reiatsu and showed what had earned her her spot as the Cuatro Espada. The simple pressure of her reiatsu made the shinigami crinch, it did not take long before he started running. Mata made a small jump of joy and started to follow while purposly missing him when she fired off small cero's. The houses around the streets caught on fire and as more smothered cries of trapped woman and man grew louder, Mata's smile increased and her fun as well. She used a sonido and appeared before the shinigami she was following, just before he could exit the town. "No no, not yet" She was gonna shoot the cero so it missed him but it seemed the shinigami was gonna try and be a hero, as he charged his sword at Mata she fired of the charging cero ripping a hole from his stomach straight through his back. As he fell forward she caught him, just before he could breath out his last breath she whispered to him "Listen to the screams, thanks to you i can truly enjoy this music" Mata felt a slight sadness that she could not have done more damage and destruction before returning to Hueco Mundo but the look on the shinigami's face as he had realised what his last actions had done to the town he was supossed to protect, made up for the missed destruction. "Some times destruction lies in the smallest of things, as destroying a person's mind is just as fun" With that she entered a newly opened garganta.

With the town ablaze in a sea of fire and destruction the only thing that could be heared besides the screams of pain and sorrow was a manical laughter that died away as the garganta closed.
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PostSubject: Re: Matanza Mata RP sample (Approved)   Matanza Mata RP sample (Approved) Icon_minitimeSat Apr 24, 2010 3:03 am

Seems okay. Some grammatical problems and several spelling errors. Keep watching out for those. But overall it was put together well.

Oh you chaotic evil person you.

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