Naraga's RP Sample (Approved)

(Naraga's speech is Red, his zan's is Blueand his hollow's is Bold)

Naraga sighed as he watched the brightly lit moon and stars from the grassy, dew covered field he lie in. He has watched the moon and listened to the night for years gaining wisdom in his isolation. I seek equality in everything, yet dispite my efforts, I cannot find it in myself. Naraga sighed again as a cool breeze swept over his calm territory. Suddenly, as if that very breeze had whispered to him the answer, Naraga laughed and moved his eyes to the center of the moon. Thanks. Slowly and quietly the world he knew and loved melted away in the deepest and brightest colors he'd ever seen.

Naraga opened his eyes, fully aware of where he was, but unsure on what he had to do. He slowly stood up and absorbed the sight of his inner world: on one side a bright, pleasant cove where the sun shined brighter than any time of day and the water glistened with the welcomed light and warmth of the sun... and on the other... a black graveyard full of a fog that mystified and daunted the souls of any who could see it and the brightly lit moon is the only, yet unwelcome source of light. Hmm, this is new... Naraga gazed in wonder at a large circle imbeded in the earth between the two lands. The halo glowed with an aura of both the light and darkness of Naraga's soul. Inside stood the kings of the conflicting terrains. Naraga entered the ring and stood face to face with his graceful zanpakuto: Kumori and Naraga's wicked inner hollow: Hakkyou.

Greetings Naraga. Good to see you again, hehehehehe. Naraga watched in surprise at his two sources of power speaking to him together. I see that you are surprised of our presence here in the same place. Allow me to explain, you have watched the sun and moon for years in hopes of learning why they are equal and how to make yourself equal as well. We are willing to be equal and fairly share our power with you, but before we can you have to discover what you must act as to make us equal. Naraga thought for a moment taking into account what he had learned from his experiences. I must be the eclipse. I have to be the very thing that binds you together... If I wasn't coming here then you two would never have agreed to be in each others presence. That is correct. In the times that we fight for control of you, you must come here and restore your control. If you don't then our war of control will slowly destroy you until you no longer exist.

Finally knowing what he had to do, Naraga stepped toward the middle of the halo that signified his control over his power. At that moment the sun and the moon of his inner world moved in an ark of black and white to align with Naraga and create the eclipse. For a moment that eclipse was the only thing Naraga could see as he gazed up at it's eternal command...The Black Sun.Then the sun and the moon returned, the halo expanded beyond Naraga's sight showing that Naraga's control and equality had returned from an unknown disappearance. Again, Naraga closed his eyes as this world melted before him into darkness.

Naraga opened his eyes, feeling a sense of secureness in himself. And he smiled as he watched the sun rise from the golden horizon.

(Recap: Naraga's zan and hollow fight for control of Naraga. Naraga is unaware of this war and goes to his inner world to discover that he must come to prove his control of his power and stop the war. He is now equal like the sun and the moon.)

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I REALLY liked this sample. Just the whole idea behind it was pretty damn interesting. And you did a good job with it. Kinda surprised that the hollow would be willing to be equal with the zanpakuto, but I guess that is just the way he is. (I'm too used to nutso Ichigo's hollow.)

APPROVED

Do the practice fight and you can actually fight in the RP sections as well.