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Menaldi Osen
Posts : 73 Points : 26 Join date : 2010-06-26
| Subject: Kurotsuki (Approved) Tue Jun 29, 2010 4:04 am | |
| Name: Kurotsuki
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Kurotsuki is a dark grey, above average sized, wolf with black schlera and two different eye colors (left eye yellow; right eye red), light grey claws, and light grey teeth. Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Kurotsuki speaks in a calm and slow manner usually. His entire mannerisms change when he is excited however. While he is normally in a calm mood, he could go off in violence at a single inconvinience and become calm again just as easily as he turned violent.
Release Phrase: Bare your fangs, Kurotsuki
Family: Shapeshifting, energy
Level: Shikai
Sealed Zanpakuto: In its sealed form, it is a blade of average length without a crossguard and a diagonal crisscross pattern of the colors grey and black on the rectangular hilt; a small gold triangle at the bottom of the design.
Shikai: In Kurowa's shikai, the crossguard is covered by white "fur", while the hilt takes a more circular form, still keeping the design from it's sealed form. The blade is completely black, solid energy with a slight white glow.
Shikai Ability: While the sword is being swung the swords length and curve distorts relative to the amount of force exerted, though the length does not go beyond a foot while the curve can achieve about a 180 degree curve Techniques: Rousuru: Kurotsuki releases a flash of light and a high-pitch ringing partially numbing the senses of the opponent for one turn Range: Close Charge:1 Duration:1 Cooldown:4 Hanto: Osen swings his blade creating a completely black clone capable of only one action and/or one hit before dissolving Range: Close-Long Charge: Instant Duration:1 Cooldown:3 Hashira: Osen holds Kurotsuki downward while charging energy, then releases it creating a pillar of light Range: Medium Charge:2 Duration:1 Cooldown:4
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| | | Menaldi Osen
Posts : 73 Points : 26 Join date : 2010-06-26
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Tue Jun 29, 2010 4:08 am | |
| - Menaldi Osen wrote:
- Name: Kurowa
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Kurowa is a dark grey, above average sized, wolf with black schlera and two different eye colors (left eye yellow; right eye red), white claws, and light grey teeth. Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Kurowa speaks in a calm and slow manner usually. His entire mannerisms change when he is excited however. While he is normally in a calm mood, he could go off in violence at a single inconvinience and become calm again just as easily as he turned violent.
Release Phrase: Howl, Kurowa
Family: Energy
Level: Shikai
Sealed Zanpakuto: In its sealed form, it is a blade of average length without a crossguard and a diagonal crisscross pattern of the colors grey and black on the rectangular hilt; a small gold triangle at the bottom of the design.
Shikai: In Kurowa's shikai, the crossguard is covered by white "fur", while the hilt takes a more circular form, still keeping the design from it's sealed form. The blade is completely black with a slight white glow.
Shikai Ability: While the sword is being swung, near the end of the arc the blade extends to an extent. Techniques: Hanto: Osen charges his reiatsu into his blade and shoots a straight white beam from his sword. Torimono: As Osen swings his blade, a white, crescent projectile is launched from his blade. Uchitoru: Osen charges reiatsu into his blade, then rushes towards his opponent and releases the stored energy in a violent slash. | |
| | | Fuuga Natsu
Posts : 369 Points : 77 Join date : 2010-04-06 Age : 36 Location : Denmark
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Tue Jun 29, 2010 5:31 pm | |
| I'd like to know what makes the blade extend, since it's an Energy type Zanpakuto.
Also, you wrote no restrictions at all on your techniques (charge, duration or cooldown). Before that's done, the Zanpakuto can't really be accepted or denied.
Personally I find the Zanpakuto techniques quite bland, I think spicing them up a little would do wonders, but it's up to you. | |
| | | Menaldi Osen
Posts : 73 Points : 26 Join date : 2010-06-26
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:35 am | |
| I going to change some things over the course of a couple days.
mostly because the techniques are bland. | |
| | | Fukki Kurayami
Posts : 296 Points : 143 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 36 Location : Brazil lol
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Wed Jun 30, 2010 3:46 am | |
| it sightly resembles Kisuke's Benihime and the way it shoots energy from it some more work and description and it may end up doing fine i think, not forgetting to add the cooldowns and stuff..
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| | | Madame Rose
Posts : 458 Points : 59 Join date : 2010-02-23
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:33 pm | |
| It's half Benihime and half Shinso, really. Well, and half Team Jacob, but I'll not go into that. Just, change it, please. It's bleck at best. | |
| | | Menaldi Osen
Posts : 73 Points : 26 Join date : 2010-06-26
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:10 am | |
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| | | Zafaron Uriuc Admin
Posts : 772 Points : 161 Join date : 2010-02-12 Age : 32 Location : California Dude!
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Mon Jul 05, 2010 6:42 pm | |
| I guess it looks good now. As always if someone has n issue then let me know.
APPROVED | |
| | | Menaldi Osen
Posts : 73 Points : 26 Join date : 2010-06-26
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:42 pm | |
| Is it okay if I slightly tone down the cooldown for Hashira? | |
| | | Spinzaku
Posts : 258 Points : 99 Join date : 2010-02-17 Age : 43 Location : Somewhere Eating my Chiken Nuggets
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:44 pm | |
| Zaffa i'm the one that told him to lower it. Seven is insane. A fight could be over in seven posts. So I think four would be a more fitting number. | |
| | | Zafaron Uriuc Admin
Posts : 772 Points : 161 Join date : 2010-02-12 Age : 32 Location : California Dude!
| Subject: Re: Kurotsuki (Approved) Sun Jul 11, 2010 12:06 am | |
| I see no problem then. Must not have noticed that when I originally approved it. 4 cooldown is fine. | |
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