Kazuki Kadarame
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 | Subject: Rounin Ryuu (Approved)  Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:00 am | |
| Name: Rounin Ryuu
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: Rounin Ryuu takes the appearance of a flaming dragon. Circling over a volcano. Each roar bringing forth erupts. over the earth in lava.
At times however Ryuu has taking a humaniod form. Appearing as a man with dragon wings, and claws for hands. he's quite interesting to look at. Wings being made of fire like his whole mid-section.
Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: Rounin Ryuu is quite arrogant, and overconfident. Preferring to attack his enemies with relentless fury while keeping a type of elegance to its strikes.
Release Phrase: "Unaru, Rounin Ryuu!"
Family: Inferno
Level: Bankai
Sealed Zanpakuto: Your normal Katana with a volcano guard, the sword looking like it's erupting from the top. The handle is all red.
Shikai: https://2img.net/h/oi41.tinypic.com/2zdn67m.jpg
Shikai Ability: Ryuu manipulates Fire, and his families. With a single swing of his blade kazuki, and unleash a torrent of flames. Able to incarnate anything in it's path. however this isn't what makes Ryuu so dangerous. As being mixed with his spiritual energy Ryuu can take on a ability it master has. Sense birth Kazuki has been able to find weaknesses in Reaitsu, and use it to bring the Kido, or energy to it's knees. Ryuu can do the same as it burns through anything. Even Energy itself.
Bankai: Raikanbou Rounin Ryuu, See Avatar. Weapon also.
Bankai Release Phrase: Bankai
Bankai Ability: For some reason his bankai cannot be released unless his mask is already on. because so he normally doesn't use it. However when in bankai after his mask is used up he had still hold his bankai form. Within this form he can fire flames from his weapon in the form of a spinning drill. But it's not limited to just that. It's been shown that he can direct the flames once they've been released with his sword, or hands. The flames he fires can also take the shape of animals. Calling flaming beasts to fight for him. All while sitting back, and watching.
Techniques:
Raika, Lighting Flash: Rotating his sword, or Lance Kazuki can form twin flaming tornados at the end of his weapon. Allowing him to fire more compressed, and speedy bursts of flames. these flames can follow a target.
1 turn charge, 3 duration, 2 turn cooldown
Ragios, Flaming wall: Erupting from under the ground a pillar of flames erupts upward. Any trapped within its area is instantly fired.
Shikai: Three pillars, 1 turn charge, 4 turn cooldown
Bankai: Six pillars, 2 turn Charge, 6 post cooldown
Raijin Hatomaru Karisogaru, Flames of Hell: My focusing his reaitsu back into his body Kazuki can increase his speed, strength, and fighting abilities. Within this tech his punchs even become coated with flames after contact. While walking in this form every step, even if Mid-air, forms a great deal of flames. In this form the flames take a dark black color. Seeming to want to drag you to the gates of hell. Making him a walking Wild Fire.
Bankai: 3 turn Charge, 6 turn duration, 10 turn cooldown
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Zafaron Uriuc
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| | Subject: Re: Rounin Ryuu (Approved) Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:40 am | |
| Second part of the Shikai ability should be removed. Too powerful for Shikai since you also already can burn through energy.
A little confused about the first ability though, you mentioned things about him bringing Kido to its knees. (Which is a weird statement anyways). Is the only thing it can do is burn through energy? Because if so that is fine.
No on Rakia. Too powerful, I will not approve it.
For Raigos you can put the shikai at one charge and the bankai at two. Doesn't need to be three.
For Raijin you can put the charge at three since that is a pretty nasty ability. But five is just ridiculous. In five turns an entire battle could be over. Also put the duration to 6 instead of seven. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Rounin Ryuu (Approved) Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:36 pm | |
| - zafaron uriuc wrote:
For Raigos you can put the shikai at one charge and the bankai at two. Doesn't need to be three. I meant using all of the tornadoes, it can be one and two charges respectively. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Rounin Ryuu (Approved) Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:33 pm | |
| Thanks for finally changing.
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