Shimekiri (Approved)

Name: Shimekiri

Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: A humanoid woman in a hooded, open, black cloak. She wears grey long-sleeved shirt with black pants and brown shoes. She is a greyish-pale with long raven hair and violet eyes.Her nails on her hands are fully grown and pointed like claws

Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: The spirit of Shimekiri is very lax and does not prefer to do anything. All it wants to do is lay around and get things over quick.

Release Phrase: Righteous blade, condemn their souls and punish them for their sins, Shimekiri.

Family: Melee

Level: Bankai

Sealed Zanpakuto: it takes the form of a standard katana, with a black rectangular guard and a purple and black diagonal criss-cross design going down a circular hilt, a silver rounded "cap" at the bottom.

Shikai: His shikai takes the form of a large scythe, the handle taking the form of a large bended, splintery club and the blade coming out from the side, connected to a chain inside of the the wood.

Shikai Ability: He is able to use his shikai in multiple ways, between the blade and the club in its normal state and while in cool down from on of its techniques, a long range blade, mid range chain and a close range club. In addition, the wooden part of his zanpakuto can chip of by use of its two techniques, its bankai technique, damage, or by design. These little splinters can slow down the opponent and can be thrown like throwing needles. Contact with it also causes splintering but is not as effective as throwing them

Bankai: While his handle stays utterly the same, the scythe blade of the zanpakuto becomes two large axe blades on either side of the club. Also, Sendo gains a cloak like that of his zanpakuto spirit, which replaces his trenchcoat if he's wearing it.

Bankai Release Phrase: Bankai, all destroying phoenix of righteous light, burn these heathens and sinners, for repentance is no longer an option, Tadashii Shimekiri.

Bankai Ability: At Sendo's discrepency, he can cause his blades to spin like a spinning saw, in addition to its previous abilities.


Techniques:
Jumo* (Shikai and Bankai): Sendo aims his zanpakuto with the/its blade down and then its blade(s) explode forward with great speed, connected by a chain. While in bankai, its blades spin while moving forward. During its cooldown, its blade(s) slowly retract towards the club. Until it fully retracts, its chain can also be used in battle.

Duration: 1 Cooldown:3

Sange* (Shikai and Bankai): Sendo swings his zanpakuto and the chain swings around the victim multiple times, entrapping them. From their, it is at his discretion to swing at them with the club, release them or throw them somewhere. During its cooldown, its blade(s) slowly retract towards the club. Until it fully retracts, its chain can also be used in battle.

Duration: if he uses it passively, 1-3 based on discrepency, any attack or kido forces this technique into cooldown. Cooldown:3

*Sendo cannot use a technique while waiting for this technique to cooldown

Alriht, despite the fact that English is crying right now due to be assaulted by this, I think the techs are okay.

However, I am confused by Rirakkusu. The other two techs already are used to entrap his opponent or attack them, and that already releases the chain. So why would he just release the chain anyways? If the other techs release the chain and can allow him to attack with the blade as well, why would he ever just release the chain? I would understand if there was some difference of cooldown or duration, but there isn't.

Also, you are using the word discrepency wrong and it hurts me.

So explain or change Rirakkusu please.


Edit: Everything is fixed so

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