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A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 8:03 am

Name: Touketsu Joufu (Frozen Warrior)

Manifestation: A man wraped in bandages and clad in broken, icy-blue samurai armor. The bandages cover his face so that only him eyes and hair can be seen.

Sealed Form: Touketsu Joufu resembles a regular length katana in its sealed form. Its grip is icy-blue and the tuba is edged and a little bit barbed. The blade itself has a slight hint of bluish.

Release Fraze: Kogoeshinu (Freeze to death)

Shikai Form: Touketsu Joufu grows when its released. Its legth almost matches Takeshi’s height. The blade becomes broader and straightens out. It is still one-edged and still has the katana like tp. The Icy-blue becomes more visible on the blade. A blood-ditch runs from just in front of the handle to where the tip begins.

Shikai Ability: Touketsu Joufu is unique in the Ice/snow family. Instead of the usual freezing and slowing, this Zanpakutou is a power-type. Its attacks are powerful and damaging and do involve freezing and such. When going into its Shikai form, the surrounding air gets colder. It is not as much to weaken the opponent, but more to demoralize them.

Shikai Techs

Hauringu Hakyoku (Howling Cataclysm)
With a swing of a blade, a frigid blast of icy air is send in the direction of the swing. It can be seen by the mist and a bit of frosted snow. When traveling close to a surface, it leaves a layer of frost on the surface. When hitting a target, the force knocks them back and the impact itself might affect their insides. The outside hurts them too because of the rapid temperature change. The weaker targets might result in getting severe frostbites. Overall the effects on targets might be slowing them down.
Instant attack, 3 posts cooldown, 2-5 posts slow on target.

Monosugoi (Shatter)
A brutal strike that is meant to severely hurt the target. The blade gets covered by a layer of thick reiatsu and as it nears the target, this reiatsu begins to freeze whatever it touches. The force the blade swung shatters the frozen parts.
1 post charge, 5 post cooldown

Gosunkugi no Koori (Spikes of Ice)
This can be used as an offensive or a defensive technique. It can generate multiple spikes at where-ever Takeshi wishes. However, if he wants to make them a distance away from himself, he has to put Touketsu Joufu into contact with the surface, say for example, the ground. The spikes can be created anywhere on the ground or on something that is in contact with the ground. The limit is 50 meters. As a defensive skill, the spikes can be generated out of thin air. The limit of that however, is the reach of his blade.
Instant cast, three turns cooldown.[b]
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 8:42 am

All in all, good but I have to note a few things;
1)You said that your zanpakuto is unique,and you mean by that it doesn't use slow and freezing techniques,yet the first skill has a slow effect on targets.
2)The third skill,do the spikes come instantly from the ground?
3)Finally you forgot to add one(two) things on your zanpakuto

Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance: (Is it humanoid or an animals. Big, small, medium sized? A specific color? A picture will suffice.)

Zanpakuto Spirit Personality: (Optional. Useful if you intend to talk with your spirit every so often or if you are going to train for Bankai.)

We demand your zanpakuto's appearance while the other is optional due to the fact that you may not wanna rp with your zanpakuto.
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 2:47 pm

Well the manifestation is up there, which also shows him as a regular dude.
As for being unique: Being Ice/Snow you can't help but just use slowing techs. Also by unique I meant that it doesn't encase the enemies in ice.
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 3:33 pm

Seems fine. I would like you to make an actual post number for how long the first tech will slow people down. Maybe three would be good.

Besides that I think everything is in order.

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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 4:43 pm

one question though: When and where can I post for Ban Kai?
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 4:48 pm

Point Shop;but you won't get it so easily Wink.Read the rules of Bankai Training and you will understand.
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 5:27 pm

Wait, didn't we decide since you were a former captain you would automatically get Bankai? Or do you think we should make it so that Rogues also need to go through training, Dio?

Because I haven't completely decided one way or the other.
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeMon Feb 22, 2010 5:35 pm

I would say that Vizards who had previously been captains before hollowfication do not need to train for bankai. If a vizard was previously a lieutenant or below, then THEY would have to train.
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 23, 2010 5:28 am

ok, so the next question, where do I put up the Ban Kai?
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PostSubject: Re: Touketsu Joufu(Approved)   Touketsu Joufu(Approved) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 23, 2010 5:34 am

Well,I say that they could learn the bankai by a rogue that has already learned it.He could guide Takeshi into learning Bankai.
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