Hoshi (Approved)

Name: Hoshi (Stars)

Release Phrase:...Doshaburi Taoremasu (fall down)

Represent: Rebel

Family: Recklessness. Celestial

Sealed Description: A black Zanpaktuo with silver wave like designs, its 25” inches in length, and shines in moonlight.

Released Description: As Denzeru release his Zapakuto, It grows to 35 inches in feet, and appears to have stars on it.In his released state, his mask covers his whole face, while a star can be seen on his cheek. He also gains a hollowfied scarf, and hollowfied combat boots. His “3” mark moves to the left side of his chest. On his back a Red star can be seen as a protective shell. In his left palm a red star can be pulled of his body to play with if bored.

Resurrection ability: In his released state, Denzeru can summon meteors at will. He also can summon meteors that can easily be thrown at his will. They stick to their opponents, and explode on contact, if they miss their target Denzeru can retract them back. He also has gained the ability to numb the affects of pain though; he will feel later on after he releaes his resurrection form. He tends to just fight, and never stop until his foe is dead, or near death. He uses instinct to dodge, and fight only getting lucky. He can not detect his opponent’s movements. Some of his physical abilities are increased, but not drastically.

Ultimate: Meteor ring- An attack, which summons condensed comets, that stores high energy. These meteors orbit around Denzeru, and dance around his body. He can also retracts these meteors as well. He can send each of these meteors at once, or at the same time to an opponent, creating a huge explosion. It gives him some protection as they revolve around his body.(Charge Time: 3 posts, Duration: 5posts, Coold Down: 10 posts)

Techniques:

Rebel’s Pain: Denzeru get as close to the foe as he can and explodes a comet, damaging him, and the foe. Down side, is that a skilled foe can dodge.
(Charge time: 0 posts, Duration: instant, cool down: 4 post)

Give, and receive: Denzeru can give up his ability to numb pain, to increase physical attribute even more. His flash step speed is increased immensely, and upper body strength is increased immensely. Downside: He’s able to feel the full amount of pain while using this technique.
(Charge time: 1 posts, Duration: 6 post, cool down: 8 post)

Meteor Blitz: Denzeru jumps into the sky, and shoots twenty meteors towards foe(s), and comes down with his Zanpaktuo, causing a huge explosion. After making contact with the attack, he laughs hysterically. Downside: Even with his numb effect, he stills feel the immense pain form the attack.

(Charge time: 2 posts, Duration: Instant, Cool down: 6 post)

(Is this okay? I think I should dumb down the Ultimate and the third technique…Just let me know before I do it though.)

So the comets come out of his gun? Please clarify that. And what does "a shooting star can be seen moving" mean? You mean on his mask?

Also, that Ultimate is WAY too powerful - 15 miles? 60 miles? Change it to something less drastic - like they if they hit someone they stick to them and cause a large explosion.

As a side note, you can lower the charge times for Give & Receive and Meteor Storm; they don't need to have such long charge times. Lower Meteor Storm's cooldown to 4 or something, and add durations and stuff to your ultimate.

Changes are made, all looks good.

APPROVED

Overruling you slightly Levi.

Take off charge for give and receive. No reason for that.

Rebel's Pain can be brought to one turn.

Meteor Blitz should have at least a six turn cooldown.

Alright, it seems you made the changes. So,

APPROVED by myself as well.