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Bleach: Awakening of the Elder Ones

A Bleach RP based in an alternate universe. Years of struggle and strife are common on this planet. But this chaos is slowly catching the attention of those that should have remained asleep.
 
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PostSubject: Re: Keiichirou no Sample desu :)   Keiichirou no Sample desu :) Icon_minitimeSat Apr 03, 2010 3:21 am

Okay, apart from a few grammar mistakes ( 7 or 8!), it looks approvable but please;
1)When a person speaks please "use something like this"
2)Your zanpakuto turned into your sister's form, amirite? Then isn't your zanpakuto a female?
3)That looks like the wall of Troy, please refrain from writing such big texts

Answer the second question please and no, I am not an oddball :-D
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Yes, I unfortunately rushed this RP Sample. I will be doing spelling checks, and will fix grammar mistakes as well.

The Zanpakuto spirit is a form of potential, if you get what I mean. It has two names, and two forms. One form takes an appearance of a male, and the other form takes its look as a female; precisely, her sister.
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PostSubject: Re: Keiichirou no Sample desu :)   Keiichirou no Sample desu :) Icon_minitimeSat Apr 03, 2010 7:11 am

Tenshintai (転神体, lit. "Change [Death] God Body", Viz: "Divine Transfer Body"): Artifact belonging to the Onmitsukidō, but invented and tested by Urahara. The item is a vaguely human-shaped, man-sized doll used to forcibly materialize the spirit of a Zanpakutō into the real world when stabbed by the Zanpakutō. In doing so, the user can subjugate the spirit and attain the Bankai of their Zanpakutō. The materialization lasts for about three days, after which the spirit reverts back into the doll that spawned it. Without this invention, achieving the Bankai takes at least ten years, not to mention the many years of combat experience needed. This method, however, is very dangerous due to the fact that it forcibly materializes the Zanpakutō's spirit. If used more than three times consecutively, it is possibly fatal to the user
(Credits to BleachWikia)

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